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Is it even worth it to try?
To set my alarm every night
And then to succumb to it each morning
Before even the night succumbs to day

To get on the bus in the rain
Go out
   Wherever that is today
And stare into your unsure eyes
From across the table

Those eyes have given me strength before
   A false sense of purpose
      Through infatuation
But now they pull me down
Like rocks tied to my heart
   Slowly sinking
      Through your arms
Until i'm sprawled out on the floor
   Avoiding your gaze
      And the decision you finally made
©2005-2009 ~thisbusinessofart
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:iconretaliation:
nice piece of modern poetry :D

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Use your feelings Obi-Wan
:iconthisbusinessofart:
thanks so much for the favourate =D

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I dont usually enjoy relationship poems, but i really enjoyed this one! It pulled me in. Good job.

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:iconthisbusinessofart:
thanks =)

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Too much liquor's like salt on a slug.

konoway tillicums klatawa kunamokst klaska mamook okoke huloima chee illahie
:iconmickeys-bitch:
Eeep. These are really really good.

I dunno. I'm not much of a critic. I just like 'em. :D
:iconthisbusinessofart:
thank you. :)

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Too much liquor's like salt on a slug.

konoway tillicums klatawa kunamokst klaska mamook okoke huloima chee illahie

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